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Nicki	Verfasst am: 08. Okt 2014 09:06    Titel: Super gemacht! Hei Ich muss auch eine Präsentation in Englisch halten und alles frei sprechen (auswendig) können Naja ich finde deine Präsentation richtig gut und ich finde da muss man nichts mehr verbessern [/b]
Goldenhind	Verfasst am: 06. Nov 2006 18:17    Titel: "Hello, good morning" finde ich doppelt gemoppelt. "Good morning" reicht vollkommen. Du verwendest deutlich zu oft "I'd like to...". Das ist so eine hohle Phrase, die man vielleicht einmal verwenden kann. Ein Satz wie "The owner of the London Eye is the airline British Aiways and the oppening was 1999, but for visitiórs because technical problems in the Year 2000" ist fürs Englische eigentlich schon zu verschachtelt. ich würde es so machen: "The owner of the London Eye is the airline British Airways. It was (officially) opened in 1999, but for visitors not until 2000, due to technical problems." Der Satz "but usually the weather must be good" macht für mich keinen Sinn. Damit man so weit sehen kann, muss das Wetter ja nicht nur "usually" sondern immer gut sein. Die Themse heißt auf Englisch "(river) Thames". Musst du das ganze auch schriftlich einreichen? Da sind nämlich noch einige Rechtschreibfehler drin... Da das wohl ein Referat werden soll, würde ich das übrigens auf keinen Fall Wort für Wort auswendig lernen. Das klingt dann meistens so vorgeleiert.
MI	Verfasst am: 05. Nov 2006 20:06    Titel: Titel vielleicht: "Speech about the London Eye" (ist aber sehr generell). Bei meiner Meinung bleibe ich: Strukturell ist das in Ordnung.
Benny.A	Verfasst am: 05. Nov 2006 16:47    Titel: HI! Was würdest du als Titel schreiben? Und wie ist das Referat im großen und ganzen, wenn ich die Punkte von MI beachten würde???? mfg Benny
MI	Verfasst am: 05. Nov 2006 15:16    Titel: GEILER Titel. Benutz doch bitte einen einfachen Titel, der das Thema zusammenfasst! Zitat: Hello, Good Morning Mr. Knörr , Good Morning Mrs. Cupal. I´m Benjamin Arnegger from Jechtingen, I´m 16ten Years old and today I´d like to give you a presentation about the London Eye. My presentation is made up of 5 parts. In the first part I´d like ´to speak about the history of The London Eye. Then I´d like to talk a litte bit about the whole wheel. After that i will tell you something about the view on top of this wheel, and finally I´d like to talk about the opening hours and other informations. Now,I would like to begin with the history of the London Eye. The London Eye was designed by the Archtitects David Marks and Julia Barfield. The capsules were designed by Nick Baylai. The owner of the London Eye is the airline British Aiways and the oppening was 1999, but for visitiórs because technical problems in the Year 2000. Eine ziemlich "krasse" Anapher, findest du nicht auch? Versuch doch mal andere Satzanfänge zu finden... As the next point I will tell you something about the whole wheel. The Wheel is 135 metres high and carries 32 glass capsules. In each capsule 25 people can enjoy their ride. So 800 people can ride at the same time. One revolution takes 30 Minutes to Complete. The London Eye standscentral at the sout- water-sides of the Themse. I think the London Eye looks like a giant bicycle wheel. Now I come to the next point. The view from the ist besser so top of the London Eye. I still know the great view because on our classtrip we have already ridden on the london Eye. On the highest Point the view is great , you can see over 40 Kilometres far, but usually the weather must be good . In 135 metres altitude Highness ist der Titel für den König... you can see the Houses of Parliaments, Buckingham Palace and St. Paul´s Cathetral. Before ending my speech ein Vorschlag tell you something about the opening hours, prices and other information. The London Eye counts 15.000 Visitors every day. The price for Adults is 12 pound and for young people 6 Pound 50. You can ride on the London eye from 10AM to 9PM. Did you understand everything or do you have any questions? Now thats the end of my Presentation. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thanks for Listening. Schau noch mal ganz besonders auf die Groß- und Kleinschreibung! EDIT: Da hat sich was getan, während ich schrieb, aber ich habe keine Lust, jetzt nochmal nachzuschauen...
Benny.A	Verfasst am: 05. Nov 2006 13:46    Titel: HI! Ja ok danke! Und wie ist es sonst noch so?????? Habe es jetzt nochmal verändert hier das neue: Hello, Good Morning Mr. Knörr , Good Morning Mrs. Cupal. I´m Benjamin Arnegger from Jechtingen, I´m 16ten Years old and today I´d like to give you a presentation about the London Eye. My presentation is made up of 5 parts. In the first part I´d like ´to speak about the history of The London Eye. Then I´d like to talk a litte bit about the whole wheel. After that i will talk tell you something about the view on top of this wheel, and Finally I´d like to talk about the oppening hours and other informations. Now,I would like to begin with the history of the London Eye. The London Eye was designed by the Archtitects David Marks and Julia Barfield. The capsules were designed by Nick Baylai. The owner of the London Eye is the airline British Aiways and the oppening was 1999, but for visitiórs because technical problems in the Year 2000. At the next Point I will tell you something about the whole wheel. The Wheel is 135 metres high and carries 32 Glass Capsules. In each Capsule 25 people can enjoy their ride. So 800 people can ride at the same time. One revolution takes 30 Minutes to Complete. The London Eye standscentral at the sout- water-sides of the Themse. I think the London Eye looks like a giant bicycle wheel. Now I came to the next point. The view on Top of the London Eye. I still know the great view because on our classtrip we already have riden the london Eye. On the highest Point the visibility is great , you cann see there over 40 Kilometres far,but usually the weater must be good . In 135 metres highness you can see the Houses of Parliaments, the Buckingam Palace and the St. Paul´s Cathetral. At the last Point tell you something about the oppening hours, prices and other informations. The London Eye counts 15.000 Visitors every day. The Price for Adults is 12 pound and for Teens 6 Pound 50. You can ride on the London from 10AM to 9PM. Did you understand everything or do you have any questions? Now thats the end of my Presentation. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thanks for Listening.
Ma7	Verfasst am: 05. Nov 2006 13:32    Titel: ich wuerde am ende schreiben Did you understand everything or do you have any questions
Benny.A	Verfasst am: 05. Nov 2006 11:37    Titel: Eurom referat!!!!!!! Hilfe ist wichtig!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HI! Habe jetzt mal meinen Text verbessert hier ist er! Und am Schluss mit: Do you have any questions or do you have understand something not? Then ask me. Da weiß ich nicht ob das korrekt ist! Hier der ganze Text: Hello, Good Morning Mr. Knörr , Good Morning Mrs. Cupal. I´m Benjamin Arnegger from Jechtingen. Today I´d like to give you a presentation about the London Eye. My presentation is made up of 5 parts. In the first part I´d like ´to speak about the history of The London Eye. Then I´d like to talk a litte bit about the whole wheel. After that i will talk tell you something about the view on top of this wheel, and Finally I´d like to talk about the oppening hours and other informations. Now,I would like to begin with the history of the London Eye. The London Eye was designed by the Archtitects David Marks and Julia Barfield. The owner of the London Eye is the British Aiways airline. The oppening was 1999, but for visitiórs because technical problems in the Year 2000. At the next Point I will tell you something about the whole wheel. The Wheel is 135 metres high and carries 32 Glass Capsules. In each Capsule 25 people can enjoy their ride. So 800 people can ride at the same time. One revolution takes 30 Minutes to Complete. Now I came to the next point. The view on Top of the London Eye. I still know the great view because on our classtrip we already have riden the london Eye. On the highest Point the visibility is great , you cann see there over 40 Kilometres far,but usually the weater must be good . In 135 metres highness you can see the Houses of Parliaments, the Buckingam Palace and the St. Paul´s Cathetral. At the last Point tell you something about the oppening hours, prices and other informations. The London Eye counts 15.000 Visitors every day. The Price for Adults is 12 pound and for Teens 6 Pound 50. You can ride on the London from 10AM to 9PM. Do you have any questions or do you have understand something not? Then ask me. Now thats the end f m Presentation. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thanks for Listening.

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