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jama
Verfasst am: 17. Jan 2006 14:31
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Hi ACH,
thank you very much!
Best Regards,
Jama
ACH
Verfasst am: 05. Jan 2006 08:30
Titel:
Looks v. good - only very minor points:
"As mentioned in my resume, I study Human Medicine in Salzburg since September 2004 and ..."
I think it should say: "I have been studying...." instead of "study".
"This way I could get to know my favored medical field as well as the health care system in other countries better"
I personally find the position of the adverb/predicate "better" awkward. It might be better to anticipate the verb as in : "This way I could improve my knowledge of both...and... ".
"I am looking forward to your answer and remain"
Surely you are looking forward to a reply as opposed to an answer ? I haven't checked up on this but I would tend to believe answers to be more verbal than written. I could be wrong, though.
There you are - "somtething" indeed.
Regards,
ACH
jama
Verfasst am: 02. Jan 2006 16:35
Titel: Application
Hi there!
As the text says, I´d like to apply for a clinical clerkship. Could you check this application for mistakes in spelling, grammar and syntax? I´m sure, you´ll find something
Zitat:
Dear Professor Doctor [...],
I would hereby like to apply for a clinical clerkship at the Department of Neuro Surgical Care of the [...] from the [...]th of [...] to the [...]th of [...].
As mentioned in my resume, I study Human Medicine in Salzburg since September 2004 and already have clinical experiences in operating theatres within my community service in 2002-2003.
My fellow student, [...], told me about your hospital and your high standards. It would be a great pleasure and opportunity for me to participate in the clinical clerkship at your Neuro Surgical Department. This way I could get to know my favored medical field as well as the health care system in other countries better. Afterwards I´ll work in a hospital in Kunduz, Afghanistan.
I am looking forward to your answer and remain,
Yours faithfully,
Thank you very much!
Yours sincerely,
Jama