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tippi
Verfasst am: 18. Dez 2009 14:05
Titel: Re: Letter of Complaint
Mahltime hat Folgendes geschrieben:
I booked one of your holidays on 26.01.09 until 26.02.09 in Germany , and at first I was more than satisfied. I found your staff very friendly and helpful.
Hier solltest du kurz überlegen, ob dieser Anfang Sinn macht. Du schreibst, dass es zunächst sehr nett war und beginnst dann doch, dich über gravierende Sachen zu beschweren. Schreibe lieber, dass du nett empfangen wurdest, mehr aber auch nicht nett war.
Unfortunately, the holiday did not meet my expectations, because in your catalogue
is the holiday otherwise discribed
it is described completely different
.
At the beginning the bus did not came to collect us
There was no bus to pick us up from the airport/There was no transport from the airport to the hotel
. Additionally, the room in the hotel was very dirty and the food was not better. I did not sleep
well
at
between/in
all the dirt.
And there I should recover?
Schon ganz gut, vll. ginge aber auch: Was I suppoesed to recover there?
At 9 am on Day 2, I was waiting outside
of
for
your guide, but he
does not came
did not come
and I have to
such
search??, dann: I had to look for the beach on my own/I had to find the beaches on my own
the beaches alone.
Mahltime
Verfasst am: 17. Dez 2009 15:31
Titel: Letter of Complaint
Hallo erstmal ich soll ein letter of Complaint schreiben,ich habe damit schon bekommen und wollte mal eben fragen ob ihr Grammatische fehler entdeckt..
I booked one of your holidays on 26.01.09 until 26.02.09 in Germany , and at first I was more than satisfied. I found your staff very friendly and helpful.
Unfortunately, the holiday did not meet my expectations, because in your catalogue is the holiday otherwise discribed. At the beginning the bus did not came to collect us. Additionally, the room in the hotel was very dirty and the food was not better. I did not sleep at all the dirt and there I should recover?
At 9 am on Day 2, I was waiting outside of your guide, but he does not came and I have to such the beaches alone.