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Verfasst am: 25. Sep 2009 01:41
Titel: Re: Korrektur
[quote="dannyville"]Hallo,
könnte mal einer über meine Texte zu All my Sons drüber lesen und sie grammatisch und in der Satzstellung verbessern.
Vielen Dank!!!
1. Give a short summary of the text excerpt
The text “All My Sons” written by Arthur Miller in 1947 is a drama which is playing
after the Second
World War. The drama is a three-act play.
I will write a short summary of the text excerpt from the end of the third act.
( bitte streichen, das hat nichts in einer Summary zu suchen ) The third act does handle about a dramatically family discussion between the mother Kate, her son Chris and the guilty father Joe Keller. Chris, the son of the family goes away from home because he blames his father for his work as a successful businessman who makes his fortune by selling airplane parts at World War Two. Joe does a mistake so that
21
pilots die in the world war. He sends out a batch that he knows to be defective. Joe Keller’s son and Chris’s brother Larry
also die because
of that mistake. Keller is arrested for that point. His partner Steve Deever says that he
has made
the mistake and so he has been send to jail and Keller has been exonerated. Ann, the daughter of Steve Deever is also in the Keller’s house when Chris wants to go and she wants to go with him if he will leave the house. Larry has been Ann’s girlfriend before he dies. Before Chris can leave his home, his father Joe comes in. They come into trouble because Chris thinks that they should blame him for that what he does, especially that he “kills” his brother Larry. He wants that he will get arrested again, because
in
Chris’s opinion he
has killed
all the
21
soldiers in the war with his
actions
. Joe Keller can not understand his son Chris. After that argument (that he kills the pilots) Chris turns away. Ann takes the letter from Larry that he has written on the day he dies. The discussion between Joe Keller, Chris and Kate hold on. Chris shows his feelings to the death of Larry. He shows how angry and sad he is that his brother Larry dies and this is why he blames his father.
Irgendwie find ich es in dem Text sehr verwirrend, wann es wann um wen geht. Vielleicht solltest du das noch deutlicher machen.
In einer Summary solltest du nie schreiben, dass du jetzt eine summary schreiben wirst. Aus deinem text sollte das hervorgehen.
dannyville
Verfasst am: 24. Sep 2009 14:39
Titel: Korrektur