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tippi
Verfasst am: 26. Jun 2009 18:23
Titel: Re: letter of motivation - business studies
timbalism hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Dear Madam or Sir,
I am currently in a dual international study program at the XYZ-academy
hier fehlt dein Studiengang, was studierst du zur Zeit?
. With the
upcoming
das soll vermutlich "folgende" heißen, stimmt so aber nicht. besser wäre: following
references I will
expose
klingt irgendwie auch merkwürdig, aber mir fällt gerade nichts entschärftes ein
my suitability for the bachelor program Communications & Marketing at the XYZ-university.
In June 2008 I
absolved my A-level degree
absolve heißt freisprechen entbinden, du meinst: graduated
at the XYZ-school in XYZ-city with
E
conomics and English as major. During my A-level I
recognized
realised
my
affinity
vll. auch passion?
to economical topics.
(In class/during the course)
I
got
was
confronted with global financial markets, international marketing and the diversity of job opportunities in the business administration sector.
During my current studies
welche da wären?
I
got
gained
deeper insight in the
(
working
)
field of marketing, communication and advertising. Within my two semesters at the XYZ-academy I was already given the possibility to obtain real professional work experiences while developing weekly presentations and marketing strategies for external clients
gehört das zum Lehrplan oder war es eine Initative der Uni nach außen? external = nicht uni?
. Working in groups
wann gab es Gruppenarbeit?
gave me the chance to acquire group dynamics and improved my communication skills. To gain a wider knowledge of languages and cross-cultural competence I participated in French and Chinese courses
am Sprachzentrum oder als Sprachkurs in dem jeweiligen Land?
.
Beside my studies I am always taking the chance to face real work experiences in
the company of my father
my father's company
was ist das für eine Firma und inwiefern passt das zu deinem Studiengang?
. Moreover I am very
committed
dedicated
to apply my gained skills and experiences to it
indem du was dort tust?
. However
,
it got clear to me
slang... besser: I am aware
, that beside brilliant ideas and communication skills, strong entrepreneurial leadership qualities are needed to lead a company to success. I am keenly ambitious to develop the proper skills that
will
help me
(
to
)
analyze, measure and lead corporate strategic decisions.
T
h
rough
ich denke irgendwie,dass es by heißen müsste
the information days I was able to discover the XYZ-university,
it’s
concept,
it’s
classes,
it’s
building,
it’s
professors and
it’s
alles appos-dings weg
students
in depth
more closely, weil in voller tiefe fänd ich merkwürdig
. In my eyes the ideal concept of practical terms, projects, internships, semesters abroad and intensive language training makes the XYZ-university a
unique asset
das versteh ich nicht
to my future career.
fehlt ja eigentlich nur noch irgendwo der Wunsch, dass du da hin möchtest
Yours sincerely
XYZ-name
timbalism
Verfasst am: 26. Jun 2009 14:54
Titel: letter of motivation - business studies
Hallo,
Mit diesem letter of motivation möchte ich mich für ein BWL Studium mit Marketing/Kommunikations-Schwerpunkt bewerben. Es geht darum seine Vorzüge und Eignung in einem kurzen motivation letter zu beschreiben.
Wäre mir echt eine riesen Hilfe, wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet.
Hab ihn schon einige Male gelesen...
Wenn ihr möchtet könnt Ihr Ihn auch voten.
Bin auf das Ergebnis gespannt...
1000 Dank
timbalism :-)
___________________________________
Dear Madam or Sir,
I am currently in a dual international study program at the XYZ-academy. With the upcoming references I will expose my suitability for the bachelor program Communications & Marketing at the XYZ-university.
In June 2008 I absolved my A-level degree at the XYZ-school in XYZ-city with economics and English as major. During my A-level I recognized my affinity to economical topics. I got confronted with global financial markets, international marketing and the diversity of job opportunities in the business administration sector.
During my current studies I got deeper insights in the working field of marketing, communication and advertising. Within my two semesters at the XYZ-academy I was already given the possibility to obtain real professional work experiences while developing weekly presentations and marketing strategies for external clients. Working in groups gave me the chance to acquire group dynamics and improved my communication skills. To gain a wider knowledge of languages and cross-cultural competence I participated in French and Chinese courses.
Beside my studies I am always taking the chance to face real work experiences in the company of my father. Moreover I am very committed to apply my gained skills and experiences to it. However it got clear to me, that beside brilliant ideas and communication skills, strong entrepreneurial leadership qualities are needed to lead a company to success. I am keenly ambitious to develop the proper skills that help me to analyze, measure and lead corporate strategic decisions.
Trough the information days I was able to discover the XYZ-university, it’s concept, it’s classes, it’s building, it’s professors and it’s students in depth. In my eyes the ideal concept of practical terms, projects, internships, semesters abroad and intensive language training makes the XYZ-university a unique asset to my future career.
Yours sincerely
XYZ-name