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MI
Verfasst am: 07. Mai 2009 00:31
Titel: Re: hallo, könnt ihr mir das korrigieren bitte wichtig
So, ich habe mal drüber geschaut - ist aber schon spät, daher kein Anspruch auf Vollständigkeit (hoffentlich stimmt wenigstens alles
). Rot=Fehler, Orange=jedenfalls so unschön, wahrscheinlich sogar fehlerhaft, grün=Vorschlag.
Insgesamt ist der Text aber leider recht zusammenhangslos. Das ist schade.
Gruß
MI
ahm hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Australia
Australia is
one
of the five continents and it's the biggest island of the world
Sachfehler: Entweder Insel oder Kontinent
.
It is
surrounded by the Indian Ocean in the west and the Pacific Ocean in the east. The distance from east to west is 4.000 km s and from north to south is about 3.200km s. The country is extremely big and there live only 19 million people. Most of them live in the big cities
like Melbourne, Brisbane, the biggest city Sydney with 4 million inhabitants and in the capital Canberra
. The continent consists of six colonies: 1.Western Australia 2.Northern Territory 3.South 4.Queensland 5.New South Wales 6.Victoria and the island Tasmania. Most of the country
is covered by deserts
but in the east
there is also a
rainforest. That explain that the cities were built
near to
the cost. There are four climate zones –tropics –subtropics –dry season and continental climate. Important mountains are: the Blue Mountains, the Olgas and the Ayers Rock
, which is
a holy place for the Aborigines. The gold rush had a big influence on the population in. On the 1.1.1901
Australia
became a member of the Commonwealth. That
is
the community of states which belonged to the British Empire . Today
it
is independent from the
Britain
but the Queen is still the head of the
state
. Australia has got lots of interesting and special animals, like the wombats, the koalas, the wallabies, the Tasmanian Devils, the kangaroos with there very small babies.
In their early childhood, they are
only 1,5cm
tall
and live in the pouch of her mother. The dingos are very dangerous for sheep. A big income for the Australian people is tourism, there
is
lots of advertisement
for
the beautiful country side and the special towns like Sydney. There are lots of sights: -the Sydney Opera House. It was specially designed, looks like an open shell and was built by the Danish architect, Joern Utzon. –Another attraction is the Sydney Harbour Bridge it is called as the "Hanger". - A nature attraction is the Great Barrier Reef. It's the largest deposit of corals in the world. -
There is
only one important river: the Murray river.
ahm
Verfasst am: 06. Mai 2009 16:27
Titel: hallo, könnt ihr mir das korrigieren bitte wichtig
Heute noch bitte es ist wichtig!ich muss das morgen abgeben!
danke!
Australia
Australia is the of the five continents and it's the biggest island of the world. Is surrounded by the Indian Ocean in the west and the Pacific Ocean in the east. The distance from east to west is 4.000 km s and from north to south is about 3.200km s. The country is extremely big and there live only 19 million people. Most of them live in the big cities like: Melbourne, Brisbane, in the biggest city Sydney with 4 million inhabitants and in the capital Canberra. The continent consists of six colonies: 1.Western Australia 2.Northern Territory 3.South 4.Queensland 5.New South Wales 6.Victoria and the island Tasmania. Most of the country is desert but in the east is also rainforest. That explain that the cities were built nearly the cost. There are four climate zones –tropics –subtropics –dry season and continental climate. Important mountains are: the Blue Mountains, the Olgas and the Ayers Rock it's a holy place for the Aborigines. The gold rush had a big influence on the population in. On the 1.1.1901 became a member of the Commonwealth. That means the community of states which belonged to the British Empire . Today is independent from the but the Queen is still the head of the continent. Australia has got lots of interesting and special animals, like, the wombats, the koalas, the wallabies, the Tasmanian Devils, the kangaroos with there very small babies. They were only 1,5cms high and live in the pouch of her mother. The dingoes are very dangerous for sheep. A big income for the Australian people is tourism, there are lots of advertisement about the beautiful country side and the special towns like Sydney. There are lots of sights: -the Sydney Opera House. It was specially designed, looks like an open shell and was built by the Danish architect, Joern Utzon. –Another attraction is the Sydney Harbour Bridge it is called as the "Hanger". - A nature attraction is the Great Barrier Reef. It's the largest deposit of corals in the world. - It gives only one important river: the Murray river.