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Goldenhind
Verfasst am: 01. Nov 2007 20:19
Titel: Re: Korrektur meines EuroKom Refarat
Jonas hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Hello
ladies
and gentlemen, Today i want
to
talk aboput the Sydney Opera House.
i start (doppelt gemoppelt)
with the History then i say something about the building After that i talk about the interior design In the last point i say why i
chose
this topic.
Let‘s start with the History: The construction work began
in
1959. Jorn Utzon was the architect: He
won
the competiton
for building
the opera house. In 14 years they
built
the house. It
cost
102 millions. 1966 Jorn
got
out of the building work because the government said he
needed
too much time and money. A group of young architects
overtook
this poject and finished
their
work on
October, the 20th
, {b]when[/b] queen elizabehth
II initiated
the building .
Now i want to say something about the
features
of the building. It is 183meter
s
long and 118 meter
s
wide.And it‘s got a
height of 67 meters
.
It weighs 160.000 tons
My third
subtopic
is the Interior Design :
In the Opera House there
are
about 100 rooms: Now i list some of them for example the concert hall, opera theatre, drama theatre, Playhouse and the Studio Theatre, Also there are many bars and restaurants
Now i come to my last sub theme. I
chose
this topic because i like the architecture opf the building. In my opinion it looks like a sailing ship. Also i like the lifestyle of the australian inhabitans.
Ich hab jetzt nur grobe sprachliche Fehler korrgiert, stilistisch ist da noch einiges im Argen...
Jonas
Verfasst am: 01. Nov 2007 10:19
Titel: Korrektur meines EuroKom Refarat
Könnte mir jemand helfen, bin neu hier und suche Hilfe bei meinem Text für die Eurokom Prüfung, die in 1 Woche ist. Bin für jede Kritik offen. Vielen Dank.
Hello ladys and gentlemen, Today i want talk aboput the Sydney Opera House. First i start with the History then i say something about the building After that i talk about the interior design In the last point i say why i choose this topic.
Let‘s start with the History: The construction work began 1959. Jorn Utzon was the architect: He won‘s the competiton about built the opera house. In 14 years they build the house. It costs 102 millions. 1966 Jorn get out of the building work because the government said he needs too much time and money. A group of young architects overtake this poject and finished there work on the 20th Octobre, where queen elizabehth 2 initate the building .
Now i want to say something about the dates of the building. It is 183meter long and 118 meter wide.And it‘s got a high of 67 meter.Its 160.000 tons heavy.
My third sub theme is the Interior Design :
In the Opera House there about 100 rooms: Now i list some of them for example the concert hall, opera theatre, drama theatre, Playhouse and the Studio Theatre, Also there are many bars and restaurants
Now i come to my last sub theme. I choose this topic because i like the architecture opf the building. In my opinion it looks like a sailing ship. Also i like the lifestyle of the australian inhabitans.
So das wars!
Anbei noch die PP-Presentation
mfg
Jonas