Startseite
Forum
Fragen
Suchen
Über Uns
Registrieren
Login
FAQ
Suchen
Foren-Übersicht
->
Übersetzungen und Vokabeln
Antwort schreiben
Benutzername
(du bist
nicht
eingeloggt!)
Titel
Nachrichtentext
Smilies
Weitere Smilies ansehen
Schriftfarbe:
Standard
Dunkelrot
Rot
Orange
Braun
Gelb
Grün
Oliv
Cyan
Blau
Dunkelblau
Indigo
Violett
Weiß
Schwarz
Schriftgröße:
Schriftgröße
Winzig
Klein
Normal
Groß
Riesig
Tags schließen
[quote="Goldenhind"][quote="MIB"]I am (mein Name). I [b]am[/b] reporting to you from L.A. A few minutes ago[b]a big round object flew (SPO!!!)[/b] to the earth. At first [b]everyone thought[/b] it is a meteorite but it [b]consists of metal. A group of people has formed[/b] around the object. All wait for the fact that something happens [b]Der Satz klingt auch komisch...[/b]. Now the local police also arrives and does close (absperren) the area...what is it?? A door of the metallic object opens...oh God...what [b]is happening[/b] here??? A dark figure appeares -no these are several and they attack. Im zweiten Text geht es um ein Bild, was ich ein wenig erläutern soll. This picture shows [b]people (from) about 50 years (in future)[/b]. One sees flying machines. Probably the next generation of cars. These are no high-rises or streets award. A war has prossibly destroyed a lot. Only the locomotion means point to an advancement. I can recognize the object on the earth badly. I assume from the fact that these are small houses [b]es wird nicht klar, was du annimmst bzw,. was der "fact" ist[/b]. The picture [b]does not look[/b] very inviting.(einladend) The global warming has possibly provided for the missing trees and plants. The land [b]consists[/b] of sand and stones. If that is the future we have a reason to be pessimistic. Im dritten und letzten Text soll ich sagen warum ich an diesen Ort leben will oder nicht. I [b]do not want to[/b] have to live there. [b]Only few people live there[/b]. (Dort leben kaum Menschen.) Everything [b]consists[/b] of stone and sand. I do not know why I would have to live [b]in[/b] this place. If that is a confidential place in which my work place is then it is satisfactory. I need more people around myself, [b]in order to feel fine[/b]. This place fulfils none of these criteria.[/quote][/quote]
Optionen
HTML ist
aus
BBCode
ist
an
Smilies sind
an
BBCode in diesem Beitrag deaktivieren
Smilies in diesem Beitrag deaktivieren
Spamschutz
Text aus Bild eingeben
Alle Zeiten sind GMT + 1 Stunde
Gehe zu:
Forum auswählen
Themenbereiche
----------------
Englisch Grundstufe
Grammatik
Textanalysen und Interpretationen
Übersetzungen und Vokabeln
Landeskunde
Sonstiges
Sonstiges
----------------
Off-Topic
Ankündigungen
Thema-Überblick
Autor
Nachricht
Goldenhind
Verfasst am: 29. Dez 2007 14:57
Titel: Re: Rechtschreibkorrektur
MIB hat Folgendes geschrieben:
I am (mein Name). I
am
reporting to you from L.A. A few minutes ago
a big round object flew (SPO!!!)
to the earth. At first
everyone thought
it is a meteorite but it
consists of metal. A group of people has formed
around the object. All wait for the fact that something happens
Der Satz klingt auch komisch...
. Now the local police also arrives and does close (absperren) the area...what is it?? A door of the metallic object opens...oh God...what
is happening
here??? A dark figure appeares -no these are several and they attack.
Im zweiten Text geht es um ein Bild, was ich ein wenig erläutern soll.
This picture shows
people (from) about 50 years (in future)
. One sees flying machines. Probably the next generation of cars. These are no high-rises or streets award. A war has prossibly destroyed a lot. Only the locomotion means point to an advancement. I can recognize the object on the earth badly.
I assume from the fact that these are small houses
es wird nicht klar, was du annimmst bzw,. was der "fact" ist
. The picture
does not look
very inviting.(einladend) The global warming has possibly provided for the missing trees and plants. The land
consists
of sand and stones. If that is the future we have a reason to be pessimistic.
Im dritten und letzten Text soll ich sagen warum ich an diesen Ort leben will oder nicht.
I
do not want to
have to live there.
Only few people live there
. (Dort leben kaum Menschen.)
Everything
consists
of stone and sand. I do not know why I would have to live
in
this place. If that is a confidential place in which my work place is then it is satisfactory. I need more people around myself,
in order to feel fine
.
This place fulfils none of these criteria.
MIB
Verfasst am: 29. Dez 2007 12:50
Titel: Rechtschreibkorrektur
Im ersten Text bin ich ein Reporter, der eine Situation beschrieben soll. (Ein UFO landet)
I am (mein Name). I reporting to you from L.A. A few minutes ago flew a big round objekt on the earth. At first all throuht it is a meteorite but it is about metall. It has formed a group of people around the object. All wait for the fact that something happens. Now the local police also arrives and does close (absperren) the area...what is it?? A door of the metallic object opens...oh God...what happens here??? A dark figure appeares -no these are several and they attack.
Im zweiten Text geht es um ein Bild, was ich ein wenig erläutern soll.
This picture shows the people about 50 years. One sees flying machines. Probably the next generation of cars. These are no high-rises or streets award. A war has prossibly destroyed a lot. Only the locomotion means point to an advancement. I can recognize the object on the earth badly.
I assume from the fact that these are small houses. The picture looks not very inviting.(einladend) The global warming has possibly provided for the missing trees and plants. The land exist of sand and stones. If that is the future we have a reason to be pessimistic.
Im dritten und letzten Text soll ich sagen warum ich an diesen Ort leben will oder nicht.
I might not have to live there. There people live barely. (Dort leben kaum Menschen.)
Everything exists of stone and sand. I do not know why I would have to live to this place. If that is a confidential place in which my work place is then it is satisfactory. I need more people around myself, so that I feel fine.
This place fulfils none of these criteria.
Es wäre schön, wenn ich es bis zum 5.01.2008 haben könnte.
Ich wünsche euch ein schönen Rutsch ins neue Jahr.