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[quote="mathias22"]hi, ich habe eine Summary dazu geschrieben. ist si Ok. Sind Fehler drinn? Summary: “Cat in the Rain” The short story “Cat in the Rain” was written by E. Hemmingway in 1938 and focuses on an young American couple that spends their honeymoon in an Italian Hotel. It is raining outside, when the young girl sees an cat outside, that protect under a Table. She wants to help that Cat and so she runs outside and on their way she meets the Hotelkeeper, she likes. But when she is outside there is no Cat anywhere. So she returns into her room and has a conversation with her husband and wants to change her whole Life. At last there stands the maid in front oft the door with a cat in her arms.[/quote]
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Goldenhind
Verfasst am: 24. Sep 2007 21:38
Titel:
Das "wanting to help" geht so nicht. Deine ursprüngliche Version war hier in Ordnung.
Bei "in which she is interested" ist das "which" falsch, das man nicht für Personen verwendet; stattdessen hier "whom".
mathias22
Verfasst am: 24. Sep 2007 16:40
Titel:
hier nochmal die neue Version:
The short story “Cat in the Rain” written by E. Hemmingway in 1938 focuses on a young American couple who spend their honeymoon in an Italian hotel. It is raining, when the girl sees a cat outside, that seeks shelter under a table. Wanting to help that cat and so she runs outside. On her way she meets the hotelkeeper, in which she is interested in. But when she is outside there is no cat anywhere. So she returns into her room and has a conversation with her husband and wants to change her whole life. At last the maid stands in front of the door with a cat in her arms.
Goldenhind
Verfasst am: 24. Sep 2007 16:23
Titel: Re: Summary: Cat in the Rain
mathias22 hat Folgendes geschrieben:
The short story “Cat in the Rain” was written by E. Hemmingway in 1938 and focuses on
a
young American couple that spends
ich würde "who spend" hier schöner finden
their honeymoon in an Italian
h
otel. It is raining outside, when the young girl
"young girl" ist vermutlich nicht ganz die treffende Bezeichnung für eine verheiratete Frau...
sees
a (an nur vor Vokalen)
cat outside, that
seeks shelter
under a
table (im Englischen nur Eigennamen groß schreiben, keine normalen Substantive)
. She wants to help that
cat
and so she runs outside and on
her
way she meets the
hotelkeeper, (whom)
she likes. But when she is outside there is no
cat
anywhere. So she returns into her room and has a conversation with her husband and wants to change her whole
l
ife. At last
the maid stands
in front
of
the door with a cat in her arms.
Das Wort "outside" benutzt du für meinen Geschmack ein wenig zu oft, das kannst du in dne meisten Fälklen weglassen. Außerdem sind die Konjuktionen, die du benutzt nicht sonderlich abwechslungsreich. Statt "so" kann man am Satzanfang z.B. auch gut "therefore" schreiben.
mathias22
Verfasst am: 24. Sep 2007 16:10
Titel: Summary: Cat in the Rain
hi,
ich habe eine Summary dazu geschrieben. ist si Ok. Sind Fehler drinn?
Summary: “Cat in the Rain”
The short story “Cat in the Rain” was written by E. Hemmingway in 1938 and focuses on an young American couple that spends their honeymoon in an Italian Hotel. It is raining outside, when the young girl sees an cat outside, that protect under a Table. She wants to help that Cat and so she runs outside and on their way she meets the Hotelkeeper, she likes. But when she is outside there is no Cat anywhere. So she returns into her room and has a conversation with her husband and wants to change her whole Life. At last there stands the maid in front oft the door with a cat in her arms.