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[quote="hesat"]Hallo ^^ ich bin hesat bin neu hier und hab diesen nice baord geshen so könntet ihr mir helfen und gucken ob alles richtig ist also grama spracha und alles bte danke jetzt schon^^ mfg hesat Irish economy – Report From “Sick Man” to “Tiger State” – Irelands change from poor state to economy miracle. 1.) Introduction Ireland still was in the fifties one of the poorest countries in Europe. The only backbone of economy was the agricultural-sector. In opposite of Northern Ireland, which didn’t become a part of the new Irish State, the new Irish State had no advantage from the English superiority. The Irish develop stayed back and the living-standard was very low. There was no service-sector and the people were dependent on the agriculture. Public programmes to fix the situation didn’t help. It followed a high unemployment-rate. 2.) Changes starting from the 50’s The export-oriented industrial sector should be improved. In 1952 were the export-promoteal ‘Córas Tráchtála’ created and a program with financial vantages on the settlement of new business in economically weak regions was developed. The IDA (Industrial Development Authority) built in 1949, supported companies to settle in the underdeveloped West with up to 60% benefits, which they hadn’t to pay back. In addition they built new ready for occupancy factory buildings, benefits for the workers schooling and guarantees for credits were given. In 1958 a program for industrial settlement with high tax incentives for outlandish companies was added. The British-Irish free trade agreement 1965 and the joining in the EWG 1973 helped the Irish market to be opened and allowed Irish wares to be sold on the Europe market. Ireland profited on the membership, because it was one of the poorest countries in the EWG. Allow for the agriculture Ireland got, for every pound it paid to the EU-Cash, twelve back. A further measure in 1970 was effective attempt to move export-oriented industries, mainly electronic, electro technology and pharmacy to Ireland. These measures were firstly effective. 1969 were 262 outlandish companies in the republic settled. 3.) The crisis in the 80’s In the 80’s there were new problems for Ireland. The gravest problems were declining employment in follow of shutdown of industrial establishments, upper emigration, inflation rate from more than 20% and advancing state indebtedness. 4.) The measures of 1987 To work against the problems the government, the employer’s representative and the unions make a deal to create package of measures, which should be a 3-annual plan (Programme for National Recovery). This plan was so effective, that it’s regulars for the Irish politic. It was the basics for the current Irish economy. 5.) The reversal, beginning in 1993 Crucial for the change was a combination of more influencing factors. a) Outlandish direct investments The concept of the IDA brought anymore vantages for outlandish companies. The tax allowances prompt the companies to settle down in Ireland. A particular figured the lower taxation of the winnings for export-oriented industries and the chance to transfer back the winnings. And Ireland should be a tax exile. This politic brought the restructuring of the Irish industry: away from the national economy, to the export-oriented industry. Meantime work circa 45% of the industrial workers in outlandish companies. The outlandish investor, mainly Americans, gave their capital mostly for the modern High-tech-industry like machine – and tool building, computer industry, chemic industry and pharmacies. b) Qualification of the workers The good qualification of the Irish workers contributed essential to the outlandish direct investments. 40-50% of the entrants had a school leaving certificate of a technical college or an academy, which is financially supported by the state. Again are the labour costs in the international equation relative low (30% lower then in the USA and 20% lower then in Great Britain). Expected there won’t be an absence of workers. Because Ireland had high Birth rates, it will get more population in the employment age. For this reason in Ireland will be in future enough labours for the industry. c) European transfers Ireland had a long time a per-capita income 75% under EU-average. It gets allowance by the fond while the integration in the EU, which indirect add to Ireland’s boom. It was used for better infrastructure (road making, transportation and advancement educational systems). In future they will get fewer financial supports. 6.) The economy today a) Agriculture The agriculturally used area averages 64% of the country. Animal husbandry is the most important sector. The agriculture suffices for 85% of Irelands market and exported live cattle, meat, wool, skins, dairy products and eggs. The fishery covers only 2.83% of the European market. b) Industry Ireland has a very modern Industry. Three-quarter of the export came from the industry. The Industry settled in whole Ireland, but several focuses are in Dublin, Cork, Limerick, Killarney and Galway. 27% of the workers job in the industry. The government will advance the Industry anymore. c) Service sector The most important scopes in the service sector are call-centres, consultancies, auditing companies and law firm. The growth ranges are financial sector, the trade and the tourism. d) Tourism Ireland becomes more and more popular as a travel destination. The Tourism is cumulative an important economic sector of the country. The tourism might be supported by the government with the ‘Irish Tourist Board’. 7.) Prognosis It isn’t to be assumed the demand will sink. The main danger is, that the Irish economy as a result of the unabated continuing altitude flight from the “supply side” becoming scarce.[/quote]
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Verfasst am: 03. Jun 2007 20:57
Titel: Re: Irish economy – Report (bte gucken obs richtig ist)
hesat hat Folgendes geschrieben:
1.) Introduction
Ireland still was one of the poorest countries in Europe
in the fifties (Zeitangaben immer an Satzanfang oder -ende)
. The only backbone of
the
economy was the agricultural-sector.
Contrary to
Northern Ireland, which
did not (keine Abkürzungen, das ist ugs.)
become a part of the new Irish State, the
Republic of Ireland (2x hintereinander dasselbe klingt nicht so schön)
had no advantage from the English superiority. The Irish
development
stayed back and the
standard of living
was very low. There was no service-sector
Das stimmt so ja nicht, schreibe lieber "There was only a weak service sector" oder so
and the people were dependent
on agriculture
. Public programmes to fix the situation
did not
help. It followed a high unemployment-rate.
2.) Changes starting from the 50’s
The export-oriented industrial sector should be improved.
In 1952 the export-promoteal ‘Córas Tráchtála’ were created (SPO)
and a
programme (du musst entweder bei der britischen oder der amerikanischen Schreibweise bleiben)
with financial vantages on the settlement of new business in economically weak regions was developed. The IDA (Industrial Development Authority)
,
built in 1949, supported companies to settle in the underdeveloped West with up to 60% benefits, which they
did not have
to pay back. In addition
,
they built new ready for occupancy factory buildings, benefits for the workers schooling
(für Fortbildung gibt es schönere Begriffe vgl.
http://dict.leo.org/ende?lp=ende&lang=de&searchLoc=0&cmpType=relaxed§Hdr=on&spellToler=on&search=Fortbildung&relink=on
)
and guarantees for credits were given. In 1958 a
programme
for industrial settlement with high tax incentives for
foreign
companies was added.
The British-Irish free trade agreement
in
1965 and the joining in the
EEC (EWG ist der deutsche Begriff)
1973 helped the Irish market to be opened and allowed Irish
goods
to be sold on the
European
market. Ireland profited
by
the membership, because it was one of the poorest countries in the [/b]EEC[/b]. Allow for the agriculture Ireland got
Den Satzteil verstehe ich nicht, irgendetwas ist da falsch, was willst du sagen?
, for every pound it paid to the EU-Cash, twelve back. A further measure in 1970 was
an/the
effective attempt to move export-oriented industries, mainly electronic, electro technology and pharmacy to Ireland. These measures were firstly effective.
In 1969 262 foreign companies were settled in the republic.
3.) The crisis in the 80’s
In the 80’s there were new problems for Ireland. The gravest problems were declining employment in
consequence
of shutdown of industrial establishments, upper emigration, inflation rate
of
more than 20% and advancing state indebtedness.
4.) The measures of 1987
To work against the problems
,
the government, the employer’s representative
s(?)
and the unions
made
a deal to create
a
package of measures, which should be a 3-annual plan (Programme for National Recovery). This plan was so effective, that it’s regulars
("has now become regular", oder was möchtest du sagen?
for the Irish politic. It was the basics for the current Irish economy.
5.) The reversal, beginning in 1993
Crucial for the change was a combination of
many/several
influencing factors.
a)
Foreign
direct investments
The concept of the IDA brought anymore vantages for
foreign
companies. The tax allowances prompt the companies to settle down in Ireland. A particular figured
Den Anfang versteh ich nicht...
the lower taxation of the
earnings
for export-oriented industries and the chance to transfer back the
earnings
. And Ireland should be a tax exile. This
policy ("politic" ist Politik im Allgemeinen "policy" eine bestimmte politische Vorgehensweise)
brought the restructuring of the Irish industry: away from the national economy, to the export-oriented industry. Meantime
around 45% of the industrial workers work/are occupied in foreign
companies. The outlandish
wie ich eben erst erfahre gibt es "outlandish" tatsächlich, ich glaube aber , dass es ziemlich ungebräuchlich ist
investor
s
, mainly Americans, gave their capital mostly for the modern High-tech-industry like machine – and tool building, computer industry,
chemical
industry and pharmacies.
b) Qualification of the workers
The good qualification of the Irish workers
essentially (Adverb)
contributed to the outlandish direct investments. 40-50% of the entrants had a school leaving certificate of a technical college or an academy, which is financially supported by the state.
Again, the labour costs are relatively low compared internationally
(30% lower
than
in the USA and 20% lower
than
in Great Britain).
It is expected that there will not be an absence
of workers. Because Ireland had
Wenn du Vergangheit benutzt, solltest du schon einen Zeitraum nennen
high
birth
rates, it will get more population in the
employable
age. For this reason
there will be enough labourers for the industry in ireland in future.
c) European transfers
A long time
Ireland had per-capita income 75% under EU-average
(bist du sicher, dass es 75% unter dem EU Schnitt war und nicht unter 75% des EU Schnitts?
. It gets
oder got?
allowance by the
fund during
the integration in the EU, which
indirectly
add to Ireland’s boom. It
the money?
was used for better infrastructure (road making, transportation and advancement
in
educational systems). In future
Ireland
will get
less financial support
.
6.) The economy today
a) Agriculture
The agriculturally used area averages
das scheint mir hier nicht das passende Wort zu sein, wie wäre es mit "covers"?)
64% of the country. Animal husbandry is the most important sector. The agriculture suffices for 85% of Irelands market and exported
Warum past?
live cattle, meat, wool, skins, dairy products and eggs. The fishery covers only 2.83% of the European market.
b) Industry
Ireland has a very modern
industry
. Three-quarter
s
of the export came
(wiederum: warum past?
from the industry. The Industry settled in whole Ireland, but several focuses are in Dublin, Cork, Limerick, Killarney and Galway. 27% of the workers
are employed
in the industry. The government will advance the
industry
anymore.
c) Service sector
The most important scopes in the service sector are call-centres, consultancies, auditing companies and law firm
s
. The growth ranges are financial sector, the trade and the tourism.
d) Tourism
Ireland becomes more and more popular as a travel destination. The
tourism
is cumulative an important economic sector of the country. The tourism might be supported by the government with the ‘Irish Tourist Board’.
7.) Prognosis
It
is not
to be assumed the demand will sink. The main danger is, that the Irish economy as a result of the unabated continuing altitude flight from the “supply side” becoming scarce.
(in dem letzten Satz stimmt so einiges nicht, da weiß ich gar nicht genau, was du sagen möchtest)
Allgemein musst du mehr auf den Satzbau (Subjekt, Prädikat, Objekt; nichts zwischen Prädikat und Objekt, Zeitangaben immer an Anfang oder Ende), Adverbien und Plural achten.
Bei einem solchen Report solltest du im Übrigen vernünftige Quellenangaben machen, vor allem wenn es um konkrete Zahlen oder gar Prognosen für die Zukunft geht.
MfG Goldenhind
hesat
Verfasst am: 03. Jun 2007 19:26
Titel: Irish economy – Report (bte gucken obs richtig ist)
Hallo ^^
ich bin hesat bin neu hier und hab diesen nice baord geshen so
könntet ihr mir helfen und gucken ob alles richtig ist also grama spracha und alles bte danke jetzt schon^^
mfg hesat
Irish economy – Report
From “Sick Man” to “Tiger State” – Irelands change from poor state to economy miracle.
1.) Introduction
Ireland still was in the fifties one of the poorest countries in Europe. The only backbone of economy was the agricultural-sector. In opposite of Northern Ireland, which didn’t become a part of the new Irish State, the new Irish State had no advantage from the English superiority. The Irish develop stayed back and the living-standard was very low. There was no service-sector and the people were dependent on the agriculture. Public programmes to fix the situation didn’t help. It followed a high unemployment-rate.
2.) Changes starting from the 50’s
The export-oriented industrial sector should be improved. In 1952 were the export-promoteal ‘Córas Tráchtála’ created and a program with financial vantages on the settlement of new business in economically weak regions was developed. The IDA (Industrial Development Authority) built in 1949, supported companies to settle in the underdeveloped West with up to 60% benefits, which they hadn’t to pay back. In addition they built new ready for occupancy factory buildings, benefits for the workers schooling and guarantees for credits were given. In 1958 a program for industrial settlement with high tax incentives for outlandish companies was added.
The British-Irish free trade agreement 1965 and the joining in the EWG 1973 helped the Irish market to be opened and allowed Irish wares to be sold on the Europe market. Ireland profited on the membership, because it was one of the poorest countries in the EWG. Allow for the agriculture Ireland got, for every pound it paid to the EU-Cash, twelve back. A further measure in 1970 was effective attempt to move export-oriented industries, mainly electronic, electro technology and pharmacy to Ireland. These measures were firstly effective. 1969 were 262 outlandish companies in the republic settled.
3.) The crisis in the 80’s
In the 80’s there were new problems for Ireland. The gravest problems were declining employment in follow of shutdown of industrial establishments, upper emigration, inflation rate from more than 20% and advancing state indebtedness.
4.) The measures of 1987
To work against the problems the government, the employer’s representative and the unions make a deal to create package of measures, which should be a 3-annual plan (Programme for National Recovery). This plan was so effective, that it’s regulars for the Irish politic. It was the basics for the current Irish economy.
5.) The reversal, beginning in 1993
Crucial for the change was a combination of more influencing factors.
a) Outlandish direct investments
The concept of the IDA brought anymore vantages for outlandish companies. The tax allowances prompt the companies to settle down in Ireland. A particular figured the lower taxation of the winnings for export-oriented industries and the chance to transfer back the winnings. And Ireland should be a tax exile. This politic brought the restructuring of the Irish industry: away from the national economy, to the export-oriented industry. Meantime work circa 45% of the industrial workers in outlandish companies. The outlandish investor, mainly Americans, gave their capital mostly for the modern High-tech-industry like machine – and tool building, computer industry, chemic industry and pharmacies.
b) Qualification of the workers
The good qualification of the Irish workers contributed essential to the outlandish direct investments. 40-50% of the entrants had a school leaving certificate of a technical college or an academy, which is financially supported by the state. Again are the labour costs in the international equation relative low (30% lower then in the USA and 20% lower then in Great Britain). Expected there won’t be an absence of workers. Because Ireland had high Birth rates, it will get more population in the employment age. For this reason in Ireland will be in future enough labours for the industry.
c) European transfers
Ireland had a long time a per-capita income 75% under EU-average. It gets allowance by the fond while the integration in the EU, which indirect add to Ireland’s boom. It was used for better infrastructure (road making, transportation and advancement educational systems). In future they will get fewer financial supports.
6.) The economy today
a) Agriculture
The agriculturally used area averages 64% of the country. Animal husbandry is the most important sector. The agriculture suffices for 85% of Irelands market and exported live cattle, meat, wool, skins, dairy products and eggs. The fishery covers only 2.83% of the European market.
b) Industry
Ireland has a very modern Industry. Three-quarter of the export came from the industry. The Industry settled in whole Ireland, but several focuses are in Dublin, Cork, Limerick, Killarney and Galway. 27% of the workers job in the industry. The government will advance the Industry anymore.
c) Service sector
The most important scopes in the service sector are call-centres, consultancies, auditing companies and law firm. The growth ranges are financial sector, the trade and the tourism.
d) Tourism
Ireland becomes more and more popular as a travel destination. The Tourism is cumulative an important economic sector of the country. The tourism might be supported by the government with the ‘Irish Tourist Board’.
7.) Prognosis
It isn’t to be assumed the demand will sink. The main danger is, that the Irish economy as a result of the unabated continuing altitude flight from the “supply side” becoming scarce.