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[quote="Jack"]Ich hätte da auch nochmal ein paar Änderungsvorschläge basierend auf Ullis Version: Hi Lindsay! How are you doing? I haven’t hear[b]d[/b] from you for ages. I hope everything is going great for you and your family. I wish you all HAPPY EASTER HOLIDAYS! I’m doing fine. I finished my social inter[b]n[/b]ship with disabled people last week and [b]I am[/b] searching for another one. Although it should be spring here in Germany, we have the deepest winter ever since. Tons of snow every day. Crazy!!! What about your plans for your trip to Europe? [b]Do you have[/b] any news for me? By the way, [b]did[/b] you [b]receive[/b] my Christmas parcel with the friendshipbooks? Lots of greetings from Germany, Your friend Ka[/quote]
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Jack
Verfasst am: 23. März 2007 16:41
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Ich hätte da auch nochmal ein paar Änderungsvorschläge basierend auf Ullis Version:
Hi Lindsay!
How are you doing? I haven’t hear
d
from you for ages. I hope everything is going great for you and your family.
I wish you all HAPPY EASTER HOLIDAYS!
I’m doing fine. I finished my social inter
n
ship with disabled people last week and
I am
searching for another one. Although it should be spring here in Germany, we have the deepest winter ever since. Tons of snow every day. Crazy!!! What about your plans for your trip to Europe?
Do you have
any news for me? By the way,
did
you
receive
my Christmas parcel with the friendshipbooks?
Lots of greetings from Germany,
Your friend
Ka
Ulli
Verfasst am: 23. März 2007 15:25
Titel: Brief Korrektur
Hi, hier nun meine Version
Hi Lindsay!
How are you doing? I haven’t heart from you
for
ages
.
I hope everything is going great for you and your family.
I wish you all HAPPY EASTER HOLIDAYS!
I’m doing fine. I finished my social intership (will sagen: soziales Praktikum) with disabled people last
week and searching
for another one. Although it should be spring here in Germany, we have the deepest winter
ever since.
Tons of snow every day. Crazy!!! What
about
your plans
for your trip to Europe?
Have you got any news for me
?
By the way
,have you
ever
received my Christmas
parcel with the friendshipbooks
? (Will fragen, ob sie mein Weihnachtspäcken eigentlich bekommen hat!)
Lots of greetings from Germany,
Your friend
Ka
nicechica20
Verfasst am: 23. März 2007 15:07
Titel: Korrektur für Brief bitte!
Bräuchte dringend eine Korrektur des Briefes an meine Brieffreundin Lindsay in Kanada. Ist jemand so lieb und liest sich das mal durch? Danke!
Hi Lindsay!
How are you doing? I haven’t heart from you in ages! I hope everything is going great for you and your family.
I wish you all HAPPY EASTER HOLIDAYS!
I’m doing fine. I finished my social intership (will sagen: soziales Praktikum) with disabled people last week and at the moment I’m searching for another one. Although it should be spring here in Germany, we have the deepest winter since ages!!! Tons of snow every day. Crazy!!! What’s with your plans for your Europe-Trip? Any news? Actually have you received my Christmas-packet with the Friendshipbooks? (Will fragen, ob sie mein Weihnachtspäcken eigentlich bekommen hat!)
Lots of greetings from Germany,
Your friend
Ka