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[quote="Vetra"]Death penalty Wherever you are in the world there are black sheep[b]:[/b] gangsters, [b]murderers[/b], rapists – however they all terrify the society and confect life miserable for some people. This faithful thugs must get [b]punished[/b]. That is not a demand but is it really the pick of the bunch to penalize [b]them[/b] with[b]_[/b] dead? [b]Annually[/b] there are several people decease by capital punishment. The tendency[b] increases[/b]. After all, are we allowed to decide about one’s life? For everything in[b]__[/b] life there are advantages and disadvantages, advocators and adversaries. The supporter takes the view that the rate of the delinquency drops, that’s it a good determent, that’s the bereaved could better handle the crime and so on. However, the statistics show us another illustration. There aren’t any backed criminal offences. The offenders don’t assume themselves to keep off [b]committing[/b] their crimes. After all it is useless as you can see in the United States. [b]Ich würde außerdem den Textzusammenhang besser formulieren; wie z.b. nicht so oft "after all" benutzen.[/b] lg Vetra[/quote]
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sofie
Verfasst am: 24. Jan 2006 19:01
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he cool, danke für's korrigieren!!!
Vetra
Verfasst am: 24. Jan 2006 14:02
Titel:
Death penalty
Wherever you are in the world there are black sheep
:
gangsters,
murderers
, rapists –
however they all terrify the society and confect life miserable for some people.
This faithful thugs must get
punished
. That is not a demand
but is it really the pick of the bunch to penalize
them
with
_
dead?
Annually
there are several people decease by capital punishment.
The tendency
increases
. After all, are we allowed to decide about one’s life?
For everything in
__
life there are advantages and disadvantages, advocators and adversaries.
The supporter takes the view that the rate of the delinquency drops,
that’s it a good determent, that’s the bereaved could better handle the crime and so on.
However, the statistics show us another illustration. There aren’t any backed criminal offences.
The offenders don’t assume themselves to keep off
committing
their crimes. After all it is useless as you can see in the United States.
Ich würde außerdem den Textzusammenhang besser formulieren; wie z.b. nicht so oft "after all" benutzen.
lg Vetra
sofie
Verfasst am: 23. Jan 2006 21:15
Titel: korrektur??bitte - DANKE :)
hallo!
kann mir das bitte jemand korrektur lesen(und vl das bis spätestens morgen) ? DAAANKE, ihr seits super lieb
Death penalty
Wherever you are in the world there are black sheep. Gangsters, murderer, rapists –
however they all terrify the society and confect life miserable for some people.
This faithful thugs must get punishment. That’s not a demand
but is it really the pick of the bunch to penalize they with the dead?
Annual there are several people decease by capital punishment.
The tendency is increasing. After all, are we allowed to decide about one’s life?
For everything in the life there are advantages and disadvantages, advocators and adversaries.
The supporter takes the view that the rate of the delinquency drops,
that’s it a good determent, that’s the bereaved could better handle the crime and so on.
However, the statistics show us another illustration. There aren’t any backed criminal offences.
The offenders don’t assume themselves to keep off doing their crimes. After all it is useless as you can see in the United States.