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[quote="Mara"][b]Meine Frage:[/b] Hallo , könnte mir bitte jemand meine Fehler korrigieren oder mich darauf aufmerksam machen und kurz rüber schauen ? Wollte ungefähr morgen so mein Referat vortragen. Engineering Europe Technology is not just our mobile phone or the internet . It is more . We need technology for our live. If we had not technology , we would not live like now. For example Engineer need the computer , because everything is done first on the computer , from the design to simulations of what a project will do to the environment . If we had not computers , we would not have some bridges and tunnels like the Oresund Bridge and the Oresund Tunnel , which link Denmark and Sweden . The idea of this bridge and tunnel goes back to the 19th century , but the technology that made it possible was only developed at the end of the 20th century . The Oresund tunnel is 4 km long and includes a road , a railway and a service tunnel. The Oresund bridge is more than 7800 m long and have 2 levels ? one for trains and one for cars. It reduces travel between Copenhagen and Malmo by more than one hour. All big projects are built by international teams . Without English , they would probably have built a bridge and a tunnel that did not meet. The opinions about such big projects are divided . Some people are of the opinion that it is a good project because sweden is closer to the rest of europe and the 5 years of building work gave 100s of jobs . For example people from spain came and get a well-paid jobs . . Other people are of the opinion that its a bad idea because the bridge and tunnel destroy the sea life and the criminals move freely . They think the money was needed for other things. Of course technology changed our live. My opinion about that is , that people can better move from sweden to denmark. It makes our live easier. Bridges and tunnels are very important , because we had to move detours. [b]Meine Ideen:[/b] habe mir Mühe gegeben :)[/quote]
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chocolate4ever
Verfasst am: 25. März 2013 01:47
Titel: Re: Bitte um Korrektur meines Textes
Mara hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Meine Frage:
Hallo , könnte mir bitte jemand meine Fehler korrigieren oder mich darauf aufmerksam machen und kurz rüber schauen ?
Wollte ungefähr morgen so mein Referat vortragen.
Engineering Europe
Technology is not just our mobile phone or the internet . It is more . We need technology for our live. If we had not technology , we would not
be living
like now. For example
e
ngineer
s
need the computer , because everything is done first on the computer , from the design to simulations of what a project will do to the environment . If we
didn't have
computers , we would not have some bridges and tunnels like the Oresund Bridge and the Oresund Tunnel , which link Denmark and Sweden . The idea of this bridge and tunnel goes back to the 19th century , but the technology that made it possible was only developed at the end of the 20th century .
The Oresund tunnel is 4 km long and includes a road , a railway and a service tunnel.
The Oresund bridge is more than 7800 m long and
has
2 levels ? one for trains and one for cars. It reduces
the journey time
between Copenhagen and Malmo by more than one hour.
All big projects are built by international teams . Without English , they would probably have built a bridge and a tunnel that did not meet.
willst du sagen, dass die Brücke und der Tunnel nicht zusammen gepasst hätten?
The opinions about such big projects are divided . Some people
have
the opinion that it is a good project because
S
weden is closer to the rest of
E
urope and the
5; Zahlen bis zehn werden ausgeschrieben, besser bis zwanzig
years of building work gave
100s; auch hundreds wird ausgeschrieben
of jobs . For example people from
S
pain came and get
a; s ist singular, aber jobs ist plural; 'a' wird weg gelassen
well-paid jobs . .
Other people
have
the opinion that it
'
s a bad idea because the bridge and tunnel destroy the sea life and the criminals move freely . They think the money was needed for other things.
Of course technology changed our
life; lives
. My opinion
about that; kann weg gelassen weren
is , that people can
move better from Sweden to Denmark
. It makes our
life
easier. Bridges and tunnels are very important ,
because we had to move detours; der Teil ist mir unklar; was möchstest du ausdrücken?
.
Meine Ideen:
habe mir Mühe gegeben
Ich habe die Verbesserungen in grün markiert. Hoffe es hilft dir!
choco
Mara
Verfasst am: 20. Nov 2012 21:47
Titel: Bitte um Korrektur meines Textes
Meine Frage:
Hallo , könnte mir bitte jemand meine Fehler korrigieren oder mich darauf aufmerksam machen und kurz rüber schauen ?
Wollte ungefähr morgen so mein Referat vortragen.
Engineering Europe
Technology is not just our mobile phone or the internet . It is more . We need technology for our live. If we had not technology , we would not live like now. For example Engineer need the computer , because everything is done first on the computer , from the design to simulations of what a project will do to the environment . If we had not computers , we would not have some bridges and tunnels like the Oresund Bridge and the Oresund Tunnel , which link Denmark and Sweden . The idea of this bridge and tunnel goes back to the 19th century , but the technology that made it possible was only developed at the end of the 20th century .
The Oresund tunnel is 4 km long and includes a road , a railway and a service tunnel.
The Oresund bridge is more than 7800 m long and have 2 levels ? one for trains and one for cars. It reduces travel between Copenhagen and Malmo by more than one hour.
All big projects are built by international teams . Without English , they would probably have built a bridge and a tunnel that did not meet.
The opinions about such big projects are divided . Some people are of the opinion that it is a good project because sweden is closer to the rest of europe and the 5 years of building work gave 100s of jobs . For example people from spain came and get a well-paid jobs . .
Other people are of the opinion that its a bad idea because the bridge and tunnel destroy the sea life and the criminals move freely . They think the money was needed for other things.
Of course technology changed our live. My opinion about that is , that people can better move from sweden to denmark. It makes our live easier. Bridges and tunnels are very important , because we had to move detours.
Meine Ideen:
habe mir Mühe gegeben