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[quote="tippi"][quote="SteffenHill93"] Zitat: The Story is about a girl, who [color=red]gets[/color] [color=blue]receives[/color] a mail from a[color=blue]n[/color] unknown boy from the internet. They start[color=red]ed[/color] to exchange emails. The[color=blue]y[/color] [color=red]get[/color] [color=blue]become[/color] good friends and talk[color=red]ing[/color] about everything the want to know about [color=red]the other-[/color] [color=blue]each other[/color] A [color=red]gril[/color] [color=blue]girl[/color] [color=red]gets[/color] [color=blue]receives[/color] a mail from a unknown boy from the internet. [color=red]For the first time[/color] [color=blue]At first[/color] they writ[color=red]ing[/color] two times the week, but then they write two - three times the day. They write about everything they want to know about [color=red]the other[/color] [color=blue]each other[/color], and so they know all about the other and [color=red]get[/color] [color=blue]become[/color] very good friends. But they [color=red]have[/color] never meet and so they don[color=blue]'[/color]t know [color=red]how[/color] [color=blue]what[/color] the other person looks like. They [color=red]only can[/color] [color=blue]can only[/color] mak[color=red]l[/color]e a good impression on the other [color=blue]one[/color]. But suddenly he does not write [color=blue]back[/color] [color=red]any more to her[/color] [color=blue]anymore[/color]. She [color=red]is watining [/color] [color=blue]waits[/color] a fews weeks but she doesn[color=blue]'[/color]t [color=red]get[/color] [color=blue]receive[/color] any mail from him. She is very [color=red]disapointet[/color] [color=blue]disappointed[/color] and angry. After this [color=red]time[/color] [color=blue]experience[/color] she stop[color=blue]s[/color] writing emails to anyone she do[color=blue]es[/color]nt know, she goes back to [color=red]wrti[/color] [color=blue]writing[/color] letters with pen and paper. [/quote][/quote]
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tippi
Verfasst am: 10. Dez 2009 20:23
Titel: Re: Bitte koregieren
SteffenHill93 hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Zitat:
The Story is about a girl, who
gets
receives
a mail from a
n
unknown boy from the internet. They start
ed
to exchange emails. The
y
get
become
good friends and talk
ing
about everything the want to know about
the other-
each other
A
gril
girl
gets
receives
a mail from a unknown boy from the internet.
For the first time
At first
they writ
ing
two times the week, but then they write two - three times the day. They write about everything they want to know about
the other
each other
, and so they know all about the other and
get
become
very good friends. But they
have
never meet and so they don
'
t know
how
what
the other person looks like. They
only can
can only
mak
l
e a good impression on the other
one
.
But suddenly he does not write
back
any more to her
anymore
. She
is watining
waits
a fews weeks but she doesn
'
t
get
receive
any mail from him. She is very
disapointet
disappointed
and angry. After this
time
experience
she stop
s
writing emails to anyone she do
es
nt know, she goes back to
wrti
writing
letters with pen and paper.
Gast
Verfasst am: 10. Dez 2009 14:48
Titel:
Geh doch den Text selbst erstmal durch. Schon in der ersten Zeile ist eine Verbform in der falschen Zeit. Die Verbformen durchgehen, anschauen, sich fragen, ist das Simple present? ja? nein?... das kannst du ja wohl noch selbst!
Faulheit...
SteffenHill93
Verfasst am: 08. Dez 2009 18:55
Titel: Bitte koregieren
Bitte nach der Zeit und satzb au schaun, Zeit sollte Simplre Present sein. Danke
Hab die mal geshrieben bitte verbessern wenn Fehler vorhanden sind bitte ist wichtig.
Könnte ich die Zusammenfassung noch etwas länger machen, ist die Zeit Simple Presente eingehalten?
Zitat:
Zitat:
The Story is about a girl, who gets a mail from a unknown boy from the internet. They started to exchange emails. The get good friends and talking about everything the want to know about the other-
A gril gets a mail from a unknown boy from the internet. For the first time they writing two times the week, but then they write two - three times the day. They write about everything they want to know about the other, and so they know all about the other and get very good friends. But they have never meet and so they dont know how the other person looks like. They only can makle a good impression on the other.
But suddenly he does not write any more to her. She is watining a fews weeks but she doesnt get any mail from him. She is very disapointet and angry. After this time she stop writing emails to anyone she dont know, she goes back to wrti letters with pen and paper.
Bitte verbessern
Danke