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[quote="perrag0ne"]Kann mir jemand meine Hausaufgaben korrigieren? Vielen Dank! 1. When I start reading the text “A streetcar named desire” I thought the aging southern belle Blanche is a strange character. At first I didn’t understand her. I didn’t understand why she doesn’t want to meet Mitch in the afternoon and why she doesn’t want him to switch on the light. But than I noticed what was wrong about her. She didn’t tell Mitch the truth about her age. Not just because she doesn’t want him to know how old she is, also because she doesn’t want to have notice about her age herself. She doesn’t want to be that old and so she blocks it out. The sentences “I don’t want realism” on page 35 in line 72 shows this very good. While reading on I noticed what a sad person Blanche is. She lost Allan, who apparently was her boyfriend. After that she was very sad and tried to console herself with other men. She tried to fill the big gap in her heart, but it didn’t work. (Page 36, line 100-101: “After the death of Allan-intimacies with strangers was all I seemed able to fill my empty heart with.” In the end you can see that Blanche doesn’t love Mitch. She is just with him because she needs somebody. Anyhow she says to Mitch that she never lied inside and that he should marry her. But I don’t believe that she loves him. She just can’t handle the situation that her youth had gone and so she tries to not to be alone but if there is Mitch or another man isn’t that important. 2. I think in general lying isn’t a good thing and rather it isn’t allowed to lie no matter in which situation you are. But it is a fact that everybody is lying sometimes. If there is a person, who affirms never to lie, this person lies exactly in this moment. Although you should never forget, that lying can insult people. It can’t be an excuse for lying that everybody lies sometimes. Actually everyone should be able to handle situations without lying. It would be much fairer for everyone and a lot of problems, which are the consequences of lying, would disappear. You can see this in the story. Blanche lied at Mitch and so he left her. This was the thing she was most afraid for-being alone. Maybe Mitch wouldn’t go if there wasn’t that lie about her age. In my opinion it is never all right to lie at her girl-or boyfriend or her wife or husband. These are the ones, who are the most associated persons with you. You should have that much trust in them that a lie isn’t necessary. The same is it with friends. If you lie at your friend you aren’t a really friend. Also in a family there shouldn’t be any lies. Also when I am against lies I have to say that there are special situations when it is alright to lie. For example, when you want to surprise somebody. You never have time to meet your friend because you have a lot to do with the surprise for him and he asks you to meet him in the afternoon and you answer “ sorry, I had to make a lot of homework” you lie. But this would be a white lie and this doesn’t insult somebody, because after a few days your friend will understand everything and gets a surprise. All in all I have to say that lying is a bad thing, which makes a lot of problems and insult other people. Just white lies are okay, but of course not everyday.[/quote]
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tippi
Verfasst am: 27. Jun 2009 12:56
Titel: Re: Bitte um Korrektur
perrag0ne hat Folgendes geschrieben:
1.
When I start reading the text “A streetcar named desire” I thought the aging southern belle Blanche is a strange character. At first I didn’t understand her.
I didn’t understand why she doesn’t want to meet Mitch in the afternoon and why she doesn’t want him to switch on the light. But than I noticed what was wrong
about
with
her. She didn’t tell Mitch the truth about her age. Not just because she doesn’t want him to know how old she is, also because she doesn’t want to have notice about her age herself. She doesn’t want to be that old and so she blocks it out. The sentences “I don’t want realism” on page 35 in line 72 shows this very good.
While reading on I noticed what a sad person Blanche is. She lost Allan, who apparently was her boyfriend. After that she was very sad and tried to console herself with other men. She tried to fill the big gap in her heart, but it didn’t work. (Page 36, line 100-101: “After the death of Allan-intimacies with strangers was all I seemed able to fill my empty heart with.”
)
In the end
you
one/the reader
can see that Blanche doesn’t love Mitch. She is just with him because she needs somebody. Anyhow she says to Mitch that she never lied
inside
was??
and that he should marry her. But I don’t believe that she loves him. She just can’t handle the situation that her youth had gone and so she tries to not to be alone but if there is Mitch or another man isn’t that important.
2.
I think in general lying isn’t a good thing and rather it isn’t allowed to lie no matter in which situation you are. But it is a fact that everybody is lying sometimes. If there is a person, who affirms never to lie, this person lies exactly in this moment.
Although
However,
you should never forget, that lying can insult people. It can’t be an excuse for lying that everybody lies sometimes. Actually everyone should be able to handle situations without lying. It would be much fairer for everyone and
a lot of
many
problems, which are the consequences of lying, would disappear. You can see this in the story. Blanche lied at Mitch and so he left her
,which
. (
This
)
was the (
thing
) situation
she was most afraid
for
of
-being alone. Maybe Mitch wouldn’t
have
go
ne
if there wasn’t that lie about her age.
In my opinion it is never all right to lie at
her
one's
girl-or boyfriend or
(
her
)
wife or husband. These are the
ones
persons
, who are the most associated persons with you.
one is most attached to.
You
one
should have that much trust in them that a lie isn’t necessary. The same is it with friends. If you lie at your friend you aren’t a real
ly
friend. Also in a family there shouldn’t be any lies.
Also when I am against lies I have to say that there are special situations when it is alright to lie. For example, when you want to surprise somebody. You never have time to meet your friend because you have a lot to do with the surprise for him and he asks you to meet him in the afternoon and you answer “ sorry, I had to make a lot of homework” you lie. But this would be a white lie and this doesn’t insult
somebody
anybody/anyone
, because after a few days your friend will understand everything and gets a surprise.
All in all I have to say that lying is a bad thing, which makes a lot of problems and insult
s
other people. Just white lies are okay, but of course not everyday.
du kannst die ganzen "you" auch drin lassen. am ende hatte ich keinen überblick mehr, wie man es neutraler verfasst. aber bedenke, dass man im deutschen auch nicht ständig "wenn du dies und das..." sagt, sondern "wenn man dies und das...". ansonsten wars echt gut. hoffe, du magst tennesse williams jetzt (sonst muss ich hier leider jedes lob wegnehmen
)
perrag0ne
Verfasst am: 27. Jun 2009 10:37
Titel: Bitte um Korrektur
Kann mir jemand meine Hausaufgaben korrigieren? Vielen Dank!
1.
When I start reading the text “A streetcar named desire” I thought the aging southern belle Blanche is a strange character. At first I didn’t understand her.
I didn’t understand why she doesn’t want to meet Mitch in the afternoon and why she doesn’t want him to switch on the light. But than I noticed what was wrong about her. She didn’t tell Mitch the truth about her age. Not just because she doesn’t want him to know how old she is, also because she doesn’t want to have notice about her age herself. She doesn’t want to be that old and so she blocks it out. The sentences “I don’t want realism” on page 35 in line 72 shows this very good.
While reading on I noticed what a sad person Blanche is. She lost Allan, who apparently was her boyfriend. After that she was very sad and tried to console herself with other men. She tried to fill the big gap in her heart, but it didn’t work. (Page 36, line 100-101: “After the death of Allan-intimacies with strangers was all I seemed able to fill my empty heart with.”
In the end you can see that Blanche doesn’t love Mitch. She is just with him because she needs somebody. Anyhow she says to Mitch that she never lied inside and that he should marry her. But I don’t believe that she loves him. She just can’t handle the situation that her youth had gone and so she tries to not to be alone but if there is Mitch or another man isn’t that important.
2.
I think in general lying isn’t a good thing and rather it isn’t allowed to lie no matter in which situation you are. But it is a fact that everybody is lying sometimes. If there is a person, who affirms never to lie, this person lies exactly in this moment.
Although you should never forget, that lying can insult people. It can’t be an excuse for lying that everybody lies sometimes. Actually everyone should be able to handle situations without lying. It would be much fairer for everyone and a lot of problems, which are the consequences of lying, would disappear. You can see this in the story. Blanche lied at Mitch and so he left her. This was the thing she was most afraid for-being alone. Maybe Mitch wouldn’t go if there wasn’t that lie about her age.
In my opinion it is never all right to lie at her girl-or boyfriend or her wife or husband. These are the ones, who are the most associated persons with you. You should have that much trust in them that a lie isn’t necessary. The same is it with friends. If you lie at your friend you aren’t a really friend. Also in a family there shouldn’t be any lies.
Also when I am against lies I have to say that there are special situations when it is alright to lie. For example, when you want to surprise somebody. You never have time to meet your friend because you have a lot to do with the surprise for him and he asks you to meet him in the afternoon and you answer “ sorry, I had to make a lot of homework” you lie. But this would be a white lie and this doesn’t insult somebody, because after a few days your friend will understand everything and gets a surprise.
All in all I have to say that lying is a bad thing, which makes a lot of problems and insult other people. Just white lies are okay, but of course not everyday.