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[quote="tippi"]I suppose you want us to correct your writing. Here we go. [quote="einstein"]Hallo, I would like to write an application letter! First of all, I need a[color=red]n[/color] introduc[u]a[/u]tion. [color=red]without "a"[/color] After the introduc[u]a[/u]tion [color=red]same thing[/color] I need a main part. And at the end, perhaps two or 3 [color=red]three why not writing it down?[/color] sentences [u]where[/u] [color=red]in which[/color] I collect the main statement! [u]It is so[/u] [color=red]Is that/it[/color] corre[u]k[/u]t [color=red]correct[/color], or it's [u]too little[/u]? [color=red]sounds funny, but i've no idea if it's wrong - "is it not enough?" will suit it[/color] Maybe, [u]you know some formulation helps[/u] [color=red]there are some correction to make[/color] , please write these down![/quote] You don't have to put a "!" at the end of each sentence. That makes every statement an order (and appears rude).[/quote]
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einstein
Verfasst am: 28. Jun 2009 12:40
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Thanks for your help!
tippi
Verfasst am: 25. Jun 2009 22:03
Titel: Re: Application letter
I suppose you want us to correct your writing.
Here we go.
einstein hat Folgendes geschrieben:
Hallo,
I would like to write an application letter!
First of all, I need a
n
introduc
a
tion.
without "a"
After the introduc
a
tion
same thing
I need a main part.
And at the end, perhaps two or 3
three why not writing it down?
sentences
where
in which
I collect the main statement!
It is so
Is that/it
corre
k
t
correct
, or it's
too little
?
sounds funny, but i've no idea if it's wrong - "is it not enough?" will suit it
Maybe,
you know some formulation helps
there are some correction to make
, please write these down!
You don't have to put a "!" at the end of each sentence. That makes every statement an order (and appears rude).
einstein
Verfasst am: 25. Jun 2009 16:31
Titel: Application letter
Hallo,
I would like to write an application letter!
First of all, I need a introducation. After the introducation I need a main part. And at the end, perhaps two or 3 sentences where I collect the main statement!
It is so correkt, or it's too little?
Maybe, you know some formulation helps, please write these down!