Englisch Referat bitte um Korrektur

Mira1991 · Anmeldungsdatum: 25.02.2010 Beiträge: 1

hallo,
ich muss in Englisch ein Referat über "the Roman republic" im Bezug auf die moderne Demokratie machen.

Hier ist mein Text,ich bin für jede Korrektur dankbar:-)

The Roman republic

the word “democracy”
The word Democracy comes from the Gracian speech and means “the regime of the public”

democracy parts
The roman republic has some democracy parts. The puplic could choose two Consules for two years. And they chose a parliament of 300 peoole and a senate. But only the male commoner could go to the choice and the puplic was fragmented in classes with difference responsebilities and rights. Also in the moot was injustices,because the noble knights and the armed people were asked at first. And if these two classes aren't agree,the other classes were asked. And the People who hasen't enough capital haven't much rights.
A other democracy part of the roman republic was the choice of the two Censoren for five years. They appreciate the capital of the people and deficed they in the classes.

the boom of the democracy
The boom of the roman democracy was at the term of the Kleisthemes. In this time the moot decided about war and peace,league,the civil liberty and they choice the office. The official functions had got the council of 500 people. And they administrate the ostracism. The moot could exile this people, who were condemned, for 10 years.
The end of the Demokratie starts with Perikles.

real democracy?
The roman Democracy wasn't a modern democracy like today's time. But he had have some starts of the modern democraty like choice.

Words:
moot- Volksversammlung
to appreciate sth. - etwas schätzen
league – Bündnisse
ostracism - das Scherbengericht

Danke im voraus!

Liebe grüße,Nicole